I’m guessing the OP is a scientist of philosopher? I was a scientist for my first career and the first time I turned a written essay I was simply crusified for being pedantic and purposefully obfuscating the meaning… like I was taught. It was humbling. Took s long time to unlearn.
Not to be unkind, but I just had to:
For fun I ran the question through ChatGPT and here was the summary on the question:
The question is somewhat vague and may benefit from clarification in order to gather more specific and actionable responses. Here are a few points that could be improved:
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Ambiguity in the Question:
- The question is somewhat long and may be challenging to parse for some readers. It could be broken down into more concise points for clarity.
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Repetition:
- Some points are repeated or elaborated upon in a way that may not add significant value to the main question. Editing for conciseness could make the question more focused.
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Lack of Specificity:
- The question asks about the amount of money one feels justified in spending but doesn’t provide specific criteria or factors to consider when determining this amount. Adding considerations such as income level, personal priorities, or specific features one is looking for could make the question more meaningful.
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Assumption of Reader Experience:
- The question assumes that fewer readers will be experienced with and able to comment on the higher-end ancillaries. Instead of making assumptions about the audience, it might be better to encourage a diverse range of responses.
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Formatting:
- Consider using bullet points or numbering to make the information more structured and digestible.
A revised version could look something like:
"As a Vinyl LP enthusiast, I’m curious about the range of expenditures people consider justified for their vinyl replay setups. What factors do you take into account when determining the budget for your setup? Are there specific features or components that you prioritize? Share your experiences and insights regarding the range of expenditures, considering both lower and higher-end setups. Feel free to provide context, such as income levels or personal priorities, to help understand your perspective."