Awexla,
When I saw the subject in new threads, I expected to see a request for help or ideas on an audio question. I was surprised to see what it held.
While shamelessly posting resumes on an audiophile site does show poor judgment, I hope that you can learn some things from this experience.
From reading your resume, I have no idea what you are qualified to do or want to do.
I would be careful of using words like “manipulation skills”. Influencing skills are more appropriate in the business world.
I understand that you are a student and have not had the opportunity to develop a long work history, but I would also think twice about stating EVERY job that I had. If I were a hiring manager, I would not be impressed the dating service job. I would leave it off.
You need to think about what the JOB is that you want and tailor your resume to show the skills needed for that job.
What are those skills? Homework and research is needed. Are they teamwork, strong communication, both oral and written, good judgment, and/or high initiative, or others? You need to be prepared to site examples to demonstrate those skills.
Try to stay away from words that are too superlative, words like extreme. Extreme may be replaced with a word like strong. Your grammar is too casual for a resume and needs work. The framework is there, but the format needs work.
Have you been out to some resume sites to get some ideas on wording and format?
I review tons of resumes and hope that you appreciate the time that I have given you to think about what you want to accomplish. You have spent years in school and I wanted to acknowledge that effort and offer any help to you landing “that” job that you really want.
Good luck to you.
Regards-
When I saw the subject in new threads, I expected to see a request for help or ideas on an audio question. I was surprised to see what it held.
While shamelessly posting resumes on an audiophile site does show poor judgment, I hope that you can learn some things from this experience.
From reading your resume, I have no idea what you are qualified to do or want to do.
I would be careful of using words like “manipulation skills”. Influencing skills are more appropriate in the business world.
I understand that you are a student and have not had the opportunity to develop a long work history, but I would also think twice about stating EVERY job that I had. If I were a hiring manager, I would not be impressed the dating service job. I would leave it off.
You need to think about what the JOB is that you want and tailor your resume to show the skills needed for that job.
What are those skills? Homework and research is needed. Are they teamwork, strong communication, both oral and written, good judgment, and/or high initiative, or others? You need to be prepared to site examples to demonstrate those skills.
Try to stay away from words that are too superlative, words like extreme. Extreme may be replaced with a word like strong. Your grammar is too casual for a resume and needs work. The framework is there, but the format needs work.
Have you been out to some resume sites to get some ideas on wording and format?
I review tons of resumes and hope that you appreciate the time that I have given you to think about what you want to accomplish. You have spent years in school and I wanted to acknowledge that effort and offer any help to you landing “that” job that you really want.
Good luck to you.
Regards-