I was thinking of running a pigtail from the shielding and attachIng an eyelet to ground it to my preamp since there is a grounding lug. Would this work?
Yes and it is just the kind of low-risk proof of concept test I would try before cutting anything.
or is there a better way given what I intend to use?
Its hard to say what will be better without seeing exactly. Even then... it appears logical to assume shielding the whole length is what’s working. But then sometimes it turns out its the last millimeter of unshielded wire the noise comes in. Sometimes it even turns out its not the shielding at all. The shielded cable is quiet, the non-shielded isn’t, its the obvious conclusion. Only later it turns out it had nothing to do with that, it was just a poor connection at the RCA. Or a bad solder connection within the RCA. (I have had both.) So these things are not always as easy as they seem.
Which is why its best to go the low-risk route. Maybe you get lucky and solve it. Maybe you don’t. Either way you learn something you never even would have had the chance to learn had you jumped straight to cut and solder.